To The Masses (edit based on Tom's corrections and some of his suggestions )
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Maybe in the context outlined above, I should have rather posted this one:


Mirror's Mirror's Mirror:


Breakfasting Kaufman and consorts at dinner time,

digesting with due desire, due to a black jazzed brain,

I can’t avoid taking critical notice of a lack of

syntactic power hidden behind signals

of alarming sound, fraught with lasciviously teasing

make-ups of mellow and surreal perfumes.

.

In a night aged enough for a fatal appointment

with a sun still yawning at the oblique breaking of the dawn,

I watch and reflect upon a poet’s reflections on

a sulkily wailing and moaning saxophone, itself

reflecting upon the huffy human condition

by turning somber blackness into blue delights.
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shrugs

serge
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RE: To The Masses - by tectak - 06-08-2013, 03:15 AM
RE: To The Masses - by serge gurkski - 06-08-2013, 06:44 AM
RE: To The Masses (cleaned up) - by serge gurkski - 06-11-2013, 05:44 PM
RE: To The Masses (cleaned up) - by tectak - 06-11-2013, 07:02 PM
RE: To The Masses (cleaned up) - by serge gurkski - 06-11-2013, 08:48 PM
RE: To The Masses (edit based on Tom's corrections and some of his suggestions ) - by serge gurkski - 06-13-2013, 12:26 PM



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