To The Masses (edit based on Tom's corrections and some of his suggestions )
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(06-12-2013, 05:42 PM)tectak Wrote:  Hi milo,
A peripheral comment. Though I have pointed out to serge, often, that he is (or perhaps has always been) sel-indulgent, this is at once a virtue and a crime. I avoid going down the slippery translational route as he liberally scatters banana skins behind as he descends into his own deep meditative pit! One slip, and I am down there with him trying to find a way out. So no. My only crit is based upon the "english as she is spoken" in the hopes (often proven to be the case) that repeatedly editing away the whey will leave the cream.
Best,
tectak
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cheers

moi
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RE: To The Masses - by tectak - 06-08-2013, 03:15 AM
RE: To The Masses - by serge gurkski - 06-08-2013, 06:44 AM
RE: To The Masses (cleaned up) - by serge gurkski - 06-11-2013, 05:44 PM
RE: To The Masses (cleaned up) - by tectak - 06-11-2013, 07:02 PM
RE: To The Masses (cleaned up) - by serge gurkski - 06-11-2013, 08:48 PM
RE: To The Masses (edit based on Tom's corrections and some of his suggestions ) - by serge gurkski - 06-12-2013, 05:54 PM



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