06-12-2013, 01:40 AM
this poem need a dr grand. sadly. i am not that at all. i think the use of full stops would help me read this out loud. loved all the figurative imagery and metaphors dropped about this poem everywhere like a child throwing pedals of dandy lions. S4 is my favorite. "colony of parasites" i hope refers to humans at large. i once read a philosopher who said be the change. i anit no sage but im still talking 
awesome poem

awesome poem
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

