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[heisenborg]

Thanks for the criticism. My style is still very pre-beginner. I was more concentrating on the subject matter than the "poetry theory", so I may have gotten a bit lost in terms of construction/delivery. Plus, my experience with said art is virtually null. It was actually more of a "freestyle" in my mind, so it kind of straddles the border of "abstract". I tried to keep things as original as I could(not alter my original thoughts/content), but of course I had to make some grammatical changes etc. I could have spruced it up a bit/made it flow more.
I'll edit it when I have time, it might make my delivery more powerful.

Thanks for the tips!