06-09-2013, 10:06 PM
Hey well done for trying the rhyme and rhythm scheme. You have been fairly successful.
This poem is currently a lot of questions - and questions that people have asked through the years. So there are not surprises in the questions. If there were it might be a different matter.
If I were you, I would start, instead with what you know ... ie what you can see, feel, hear, etc. Or an opinion on something. Try to describe it as clearly as possible. If you can't describe something directly, try a comparison.
Take the opposite tack; instead of asking lots of questions that loads of people ask, try giving an answer only you can.
This poem is currently a lot of questions - and questions that people have asked through the years. So there are not surprises in the questions. If there were it might be a different matter.
If I were you, I would start, instead with what you know ... ie what you can see, feel, hear, etc. Or an opinion on something. Try to describe it as clearly as possible. If you can't describe something directly, try a comparison.
Take the opposite tack; instead of asking lots of questions that loads of people ask, try giving an answer only you can.