The attic (post edit)
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(05-30-2013, 10:11 AM)Ryan_w_r Wrote:  Dust filled bars of light cut through one another as their paths intersect.
Smells of mildew, and mothballs coat the thick, and stagnant air.
Memories lay dormant in the dark, forgotten memories meant to be remembered.
Where unneeded wants go to live out their existence...

-The attic
I like the imagery here. the last line is a bit of a tongue twister. I dont see any other words you could use there though. Good read enjoyed it.
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The attic (post edit) - by Ryan_w_r - 05-30-2013, 10:11 AM
RE: Short poem - by rowens - 05-31-2013, 12:23 AM
RE: Short poem - by Ryan_w_r - 05-31-2013, 02:55 AM
RE: Short poem - by Brownlie - 05-31-2013, 04:39 AM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by FayandFire - 06-03-2013, 01:27 PM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by Bunx - 06-04-2013, 10:44 PM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by Ryan_w_r - 06-05-2013, 02:45 AM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-05-2013, 03:55 AM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by autumnleaves - 06-08-2013, 05:18 PM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by Ryan_w_r - 06-09-2013, 09:08 AM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by Brownlie - 06-09-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 01:28 PM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by tectak - 10-30-2013, 09:43 PM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by Ryan_w_r - 11-03-2013, 03:24 PM
RE: The attic (post edit) - by MpoemsR - 11-03-2013, 04:15 PM



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