Solitude in Night

Solitude in Night

nomadpenguin
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06-08-2013, 09:12 AM

I really like it! The rhyming scheme is nice and unobtrusive. My only nitpick is the second line; I think that "giving" in this context is a pretty weak verb. Can't really think of an alternative right now, but you should look into it.

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Solitude in Night - by shekutarna - 06-07-2013, 07:09 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by AisforApple - 06-07-2013, 10:37 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by Volaticus - 06-08-2013, 06:57 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by nomadpenguin - 06-08-2013, 09:12 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by ellz483 - 06-12-2013, 01:28 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by Bunx - 06-12-2013, 01:40 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-14-2013, 02:17 PM

RE: Solitude in Night - by captaintigernelson - 06-19-2013, 10:40 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by djames1021 - 06-29-2013, 04:36 AM

RE: Solitude in Night - by shekutarna - 07-25-2013, 04:38 AM

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