Solitude in Night

[AisforApple]

You really capture the setting very well. My only advice would be to add punctuation, depending on how your internal voice "reads" the poem....add commas, ellipses, periods depending on where your voice pauses. I don't want to tell you where, because that's entirely up to how you want others to read the poem. But strictly based on the writing, it's a beautiful piece. Well done