in the air

[canofworms]

I think you are using too many vague term. Although you are most likely trying to convey that you don't understand the object and you are transfixed.
There are to many somethings and things
"You make me want to feel things that everyone wants to feel."
"Something so simple can be something so beautiful, "
"You’re just a thing,
A beautiful thing."
What if you replaced thing with a word, like creature
You're just a creature,
A beautiful creature.
Or animal.
You're just an animal
A beautiful animal
or flower
or ghost
or being or angel
or mystical enchantress

Also... the line "But. I’m transfixed."
This should be a strong event. You are transfixed and cannot think or look at anything else. But you say it so casually.
The use of the contractions like I'm and you're make this seem more casual than I think you want it to be.
If you said. But I am transfixed (maybe even an exclamation !)