Let's just pretend we never met

[tectak]

just sayin'

Hi serge,
I have not commented on your stuff recently. You seem to be going through a phase.
This is a problem for me. The greatest virtue of your recent (and not so recent) efforts is also the greatest failing...you have started to write with complete self indulgency. This is so evident that even the "form" of this piece is screaming out "leave me alone"! In other words, because you are writing veracity verse, it is what it is and cannot be critiqued on any of the platforms which we stand on.
I will, therefore, just say this. You could put it better....but no critic could.
Best,
tectak

would you prefer me to leave?

No. I would prefer you to stay...but who listens to my opinion