A Lifted Life of Leisure

[YaMarVa]

Editing clearly is not my strong point, as I am new to poetry and writing as a whole (this was my 9th poem).

What about poem number LXIV?

Maybe they're all out of order. And that's what's confusing some people?

What about it?

I am sure the audience of this board is not confused by numbers appearing out of order.

I have read poetry on and off since High School, without any prior writing attempts, I figured to write a few poems a day for a couple of months. Since I wrote about 100 short/simple poems without anyone seeing them or having named them beyond their number, I thought this a good place to start, on a novice thread. To gauge and guide my poetry skills I will not pay or attend a class for this simple hobby.