The attic (post edit)

[FayandFire]

Dust filled bars of light cut through one another as their paths intersect.
Smells of mildew, and mothballs coat the thick, and stagnant air.
Memories lay dormant in the dark, forgotten memories meant to be remembered.
Where unneeded wants go to live out their existence...

-The attic

The first two lines have nice imagery. I would personally change " forgotten memories meant to be remembered" it feels like a mouthful and i am not sure its effective and as Brownlie said memories is vague. I do wonder memories of what.... But that's just me =]