the starting line

[billy]

feedback doesn't have to be deep or hard but it has to say why you like it, or a particular part of it. say why you didn't like the other parts as much?
all we ask is that you/the members put something into your feedback other than a simple statement that says "i like it"

I liked reading your poem. I specially like the part that says: "there is by far enough to taste and much to love, ive a journey to make alone and it excites me to my core". I'm afraid I can't give you a deepest and professional feedback, but I hope you keep writing like this!