06-03-2013, 12:23 PM
(06-03-2013, 12:12 PM)samneri Wrote: Thank YOU for your feedback Volaticus!My pleasureYour version sounds way better hahaha
I'll listen to you and make those changes, thanks a lot!
I would suggest that you also trimmed some of the words in the rest of the stanzas. If you have any questions, I'll be glad to help with what I can.

