The worst part of being Alone
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(06-03-2013, 12:12 PM)samneri Wrote:  Thank YOU for your feedback Volaticus! Smile Your version sounds way better hahaha Smile I'll listen to you and make those changes, thanks a lot! Smile
My pleasure Smile I would suggest that you also trimmed some of the words in the rest of the stanzas. If you have any questions, I'll be glad to help with what I can.
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The worst part of being Alone - by samneri - 06-03-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: The worst part of being Alone - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 11:47 AM
RE: The worst part of being Alone - by samneri - 06-03-2013, 12:12 PM
RE: The worst part of being Alone - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 12:23 PM
RE: The worst part of being Alone - by FayandFire - 06-03-2013, 01:47 PM
RE: The worst part of being Alone - by samneri - 06-03-2013, 02:29 PM
RE: The worst part of being Alone - by samneri - 06-03-2013, 09:59 PM



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