The worst part of being Alone

[samneri]

Hi,

Just a few things I noticed on my read-through..
The first line sounds awkward. How about "I have known her for a long time."?
The second line in the third stanza is also off. Perhaps "She's been dancing and singing the blues with me"?
Also, I think you could trim some of the excess words away.

I have known her for a long time.
I have coexisted and shared moments with her,
Shared a life with her…
But I haven’t befriended her yet.

Just an example, it's your poem

Thanks for the read.

Thank YOU for your feedback Volaticus! Your version sounds way better hahaha I'll listen to you and make those changes, thanks a lot!