the starting line

[ernestgoodwell]

thanks man

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revised version

The Starting Line

"I am standing at the edge of everything,
I am stepping bewildered into myself,
I am searching out the details of my soul,
my entire self, the pinnacle of my purpose,
I am ill-content and I will always be so.

There is by far enough to taste, enough to love.

I have a journey to make alone and it excites me to my core:

I am staring blindly into brightness that I cannot understand,
I am eternally at ease.
I will not allow myself to slip freely into the divine grace of ignorance.
I hold destiny within my hand.

I can do with it as I please:
I am free by my own will,
I am ultimately grateful..."

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The Starting Line

"I am standing at the edge of everything,
Stepping bewildered into myself,
I am searching out the details of my soul,
my entire self, the pinnacle of my purpose,
I am ill-content and will always be so.

There is by far enough to taste and much to love,
I have a journey to make alone and it excites me to my core:

Staring blindly into brightness that I cannot understand,
I am eternally at ease.
I will not allow myself to slip freely into the divine grace of ignorance.
I hold destiny within my hand.

I can do with life as I please:
freed by my own will,
I am ultimately grateful..."


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