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Feral Cat
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06-03-2013, 04:04 AM
(06-03-2013, 01:34 AM)fogglethorpe Wrote: Hi Volaticus..I like the haiku. The last line is a perfect juxtaposition. I disagree with the others about "ajar". It is precise and works well.Hi fogglethorpe, Thanks for your kind words, I'm glad you like it. I appreciate your opinion about the first line, I just really like the alliteration. But I can see how the word is somehow redundant. Thanks so much. - LB |
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RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 02:05 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 02:22 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Heartafire - 05-10-2013, 09:09 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 10:03 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by FayandFire - 06-02-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 12:36 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-03-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 08:09 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-04-2013, 01:36 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-04-2013, 10:45 PM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 07:41 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 08:50 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:27 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:54 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:22 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:46 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:53 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:03 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Brownlie - 06-05-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:12 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:22 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:34 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:33 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:56 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:59 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:10 PM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by billy - 06-06-2013, 07:34 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-07-2013, 02:23 PM
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