the starting line

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The first person reminder gets tedious quick. Also, what does 'entire' add that we wouldn't get from soul? I understand poets are self-absorbed but you could easily trim like this:

I am standing at the edge of everything,
stepping bewildered into myself,
searching out the details of my soul,
my self, the pinnacle of my purpose,
ill-content and always so,
there is by far enough to taste and much to love,
a journey to make alone that excites me to my core,

I am staring blindly into brightness that i cannot understand,
eternally at ease ,
not allowing myself to slip freely into the divine grace of ignorance ,
holding destiny within my hand,
doing with it what i please,
free by my own will,
ultimately grateful...