the starting line

the starting line

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06-02-2013, 01:56 AM

I liked reading your poem. I specially like the part that says: "there is by far enough to taste and much to love, ive a journey to make alone and it excites me to my core". I'm afraid I can't give you a deepest and professional feedback, but I hope you keep writing like this! Smile

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the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 06:56 AM

RE: the starting line - by rowens - 05-31-2013, 08:52 AM

RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 09:30 AM

RE: the starting line - by rowens - 05-31-2013, 10:05 AM

RE: the starting line - by serge gurkski - 05-31-2013, 07:51 PM

RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 09:18 PM

RE: the starting line - by serge gurkski - 05-31-2013, 09:28 PM

RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 09:47 PM

RE: the starting line - by serge gurkski - 05-31-2013, 09:49 PM

RE: the starting line - by samneri - 06-02-2013, 01:56 AM

RE: the starting line - by billy - 06-03-2013, 12:34 PM

RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 06-02-2013, 04:33 AM

RE: the starting line - by milo - 06-03-2013, 03:47 AM

RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 06-03-2013, 06:38 AM

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