First Love

[billy]

i'm off topic i know, but i'd just like to say it's great to see someone offering help to others.

I can see you've really put your feelings into this poem and that's great - what's a poem without any feelings, eh? I don't know if English is your first language. For me, the grammar really does need fixing. I don't know if you want that - if you do, I'm happy to help. The meaning is lost in the typos, and detracts from the emotion you've put in.