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First Love
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06-01-2013, 05:14 PM
Hi Nevermore! I really liked this poem, it made me remember my days in highschool when I met my first love. I difinitely am not an expert in the field of poetry so I can't give you an expert feedback on it, but I do think there are some grammar mistakes, nothing serious I think; what you wrote is still understandable, hard to read, but understandable I think. Keep an eye on those little details and keep them poems coming!
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First Love - by Nevermore - 05-26-2013, 09:17 AM
RE: First Love - by rowens - 05-30-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-30-2013, 05:54 AM
RE: First Love - by bella_di_moda - 05-30-2013, 05:55 AM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-30-2013, 06:42 AM
RE: First Love - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-30-2013, 08:03 AM
RE: First Love - by billy - 06-01-2013, 05:55 PM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-31-2013, 09:29 AM
RE: First Love - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-31-2013, 06:41 PM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-31-2013, 11:18 PM
RE: First Love - by Brownlie - 06-01-2013, 01:54 AM
RE: First Love - by samneri - 06-01-2013, 05:14 PM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 06-03-2013, 10:45 PM
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