First Love

[Brownlie]

I am happy you came to the forum you'll find that you can actually learn a lot here. Though you probably won't learn much from me.

Can I forgot it I can say anymore,
My burden is big I can tell it evermore,
How you was so cold i can't say it anymore. - You were?
I still love you but for how long?

I will love you but you will never love me
That anymore.It was easy to say:
''I dont love you anymore''
But you never forget it for how long you
Will remember it...

And I was imagining you in dress on prom,
You was so beutiful and gone, "You were"
I live for that moment to dance with you alone
To see you maybe for last time but you are forever gone.

While I know love loss can be a deep emotion this poem contains some bad grammar. I would suggest trying to write and listening to the audio tapes or going onto youtube and listening to Tom O Bedlam's channel. I think that you have to be able to appreciate good poetry before you can write good poetry but I may be wrong.