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05-31-2013, 09:18 PM
Thanks for the changes, and no i am certainly not suicidal. Thank you for the compliment. It was a first attempt at poetry really and I was trying to reflect on the idea of having control of ones destiny. does that theme come through to you alright? As for the spelling mistakes, i'm sorry. i posted the rough draft by accident but i will leave it as your correction as i prefer your use of form.
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the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 06:56 AM
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RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 09:30 AM
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RE: the starting line - by billy - 06-03-2013, 12:34 PM
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