First Love
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OK Nevermore, I've literally just been through it and corrected what I can. I've changed things here, I'm sure others will correct what I haven't spotted Smile

I can't forget it, but I can't say anymore,
My burden is so big, I can't tell it evermore,
How you were so cold, I can't say it anymore.
I still love you, but for how long?

I love you but you will never love me
It was easy to say:
''I dont love you anymore''
But you never forget it - for how long will you
remember it...

And I was imagining you in a dress on prom night,
You were so beautiful and shone,
I live for that moment, to dance with you alone
To see you for the last time
but you are forever gone.
- Amy

(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)


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Messages In This Thread
First Love - by Nevermore - 05-26-2013, 09:17 AM
RE: First Love - by rowens - 05-30-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-30-2013, 05:54 AM
RE: First Love - by bella_di_moda - 05-30-2013, 05:55 AM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-30-2013, 06:42 AM
RE: First Love - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-30-2013, 08:03 AM
RE: First Love - by billy - 06-01-2013, 05:55 PM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-31-2013, 09:29 AM
RE: First Love - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-31-2013, 06:41 PM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 05-31-2013, 11:18 PM
RE: First Love - by Brownlie - 06-01-2013, 01:54 AM
RE: First Love - by samneri - 06-01-2013, 05:14 PM
RE: First Love - by Nevermore - 06-03-2013, 10:45 PM



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