05-31-2013, 07:26 AM
Hi AR,
First of all, I love the idea of a poem written about an Escher picture. I've always been fascinated by him. And I very much like this poem. The structure of it works really well with the context, creating the Escher picture both with the meaning of the words, but also (almost) visually, with the placement of the words.
I think it's good you made the anagrams in bold letters, I think most people don't notice anagrams, but I could be wrong. I think it was a clever use of those anagrams, and I did notice them on my first read-through. But I also speak in anagrams on a daily basis so I have some practice
Great alliterations too. I've forgotten the rest I would say, my head's not quite functioning. Thanks for an inspirational read 
- LB
First of all, I love the idea of a poem written about an Escher picture. I've always been fascinated by him. And I very much like this poem. The structure of it works really well with the context, creating the Escher picture both with the meaning of the words, but also (almost) visually, with the placement of the words.
I think it's good you made the anagrams in bold letters, I think most people don't notice anagrams, but I could be wrong. I think it was a clever use of those anagrams, and I did notice them on my first read-through. But I also speak in anagrams on a daily basis so I have some practice
Great alliterations too. I've forgotten the rest I would say, my head's not quite functioning. Thanks for an inspirational read - LB