the starting line
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hi i'm really new but i enjoy writing poems

please offer any help its much appreciated:

the starting line...

I am standing at the edge of everything,
im stepping bewildered into myself,
i am searching out the details of my entire soul,
my entire self, the pinnicle of my purpose,
i am ill content and i will allways be so,
there is by far enough to taste and much to love,
ive a journey to make alone and it excites me to my core,

i and staring blindly into brightness that i cannot understand,
i am eternally at ease ,
i will not allow myself to slip freely into the divine grace of ignorace ,
i hold destiny within my hand,
i can do with it what i please,
i am free by my own will,
i am ultimately grateful...
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the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 06:56 AM
RE: the starting line - by rowens - 05-31-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 09:30 AM
RE: the starting line - by rowens - 05-31-2013, 10:05 AM
RE: the starting line - by serge gurkski - 05-31-2013, 07:51 PM
RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: the starting line - by serge gurkski - 05-31-2013, 09:28 PM
RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 05-31-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: the starting line - by serge gurkski - 05-31-2013, 09:49 PM
RE: the starting line - by samneri - 06-02-2013, 01:56 AM
RE: the starting line - by billy - 06-03-2013, 12:34 PM
RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 06-02-2013, 04:33 AM
RE: the starting line - by milo - 06-03-2013, 03:47 AM
RE: the starting line - by ernestgoodwell - 06-03-2013, 06:38 AM



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