Feeling You

Feeling You

philoinlove Offline

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05-30-2013, 01:59 PM

I think you know what you need to fix. Make this poem/lyric more relate-able to the listener or reader by removing all Cliche remarks... I don't wanna hear a lyric my kindergartners could have written. You are better than that!! Let us see more Smile

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Feeling You - by modern_poet - 05-24-2013, 06:09 AM

RE: Feeling You - by Bunx - 05-24-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: Feeling You - by lennox222 - 05-24-2013, 01:23 PM

RE: Feeling You - by tectak - 05-24-2013, 11:18 PM

RE: Feeling You - by billy - 05-28-2013, 05:39 PM

RE: Feeling You - by Brownlie - 05-29-2013, 12:42 AM

RE: Feeling You - by lennox222 - 05-29-2013, 07:54 PM

RE: Feeling You - by philoinlove - 05-30-2013, 01:59 PM

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