05-30-2013, 08:03 AM
I can see you've really put your feelings into this poem and that's great - what's a poem without any feelings, eh? I don't know if English is your first language. For me, the grammar really does need fixing. I don't know if you want that - if you do, I'm happy to help. The meaning is lost in the typos, and detracts from the emotion you've put in.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)