05-30-2013, 04:27 AM
Word weaver I see what you mean thanks.
Unicorn- Thanks you brought up a lot of good detailed problems Clarity has never been my strong suit. I really like the last two lines of the second stanza but I know that doesn't always mean they work in the piece they came from. Also I had noticed the soggy cracked thing and almost changed it before I posted.
Alchemist- thanks for finding something nice to say =]
Unicorn- Thanks you brought up a lot of good detailed problems Clarity has never been my strong suit. I really like the last two lines of the second stanza but I know that doesn't always mean they work in the piece they came from. Also I had noticed the soggy cracked thing and almost changed it before I posted.
Alchemist- thanks for finding something nice to say =]