05-29-2013, 06:32 AM
Edit 1 at top of page with original.
I've tried to smooth out some of the bumps and and give a bit of attention to the metre of this. If I can work out how the heck to get it from my kindle to the site, I have done an audio as part of my new improved editing process Cool (thanks Milo for the nudge to get into doing audios for editing). I would specifically like some help with punctuation and metre on this one. I have read it out and then listened back and tried to put the punctuation right ...but I'm not so great at this ...so if anyone has the time I would appreciate some feedback in relation to the audio read / text read comparisions. (I want to improve my reading ear
)
I've tried to smooth out some of the bumps and and give a bit of attention to the metre of this. If I can work out how the heck to get it from my kindle to the site, I have done an audio as part of my new improved editing process Cool (thanks Milo for the nudge to get into doing audios for editing). I would specifically like some help with punctuation and metre on this one. I have read it out and then listened back and tried to put the punctuation right ...but I'm not so great at this ...so if anyone has the time I would appreciate some feedback in relation to the audio read / text read comparisions. (I want to improve my reading ear
)