Towards

[milo]

All this time I've walked "all this time" is too general and weak wording
Alone I would recommend not capitalizing each line
Towards endings I have not known not exactly a new sentiment, no child of man shall know the time or day of his demise and all

Never free, never willing It just occurred to me that I would like some kind of puntuation. also, if your narrator is doing this walking under some kind of subjugation, it would be nice to have that expanded on.
Dying quick piece of trivia: what is the #1 cause of death? - - - birth!
I am only following

The call of something beautiful awoken without any kind of sentence structure or puntuation and with all caps, the inversion comes across tortured
Fierce and strong
Loving it will leave me broken this strong, fierce awoke thing that is going to break you , wouldn't it be nice to know what it is?

All this time I'll walk
Towards endings
That have forever waited all, /what/ time? It is a short poem, maybe 5 minutes?

The structure and syntax are too tortured. The subject itself is pretty common in poetry so you really need to approach it in a new and interesting way. In its current form, this is just too vague to be even remotely interesting.

Thanks for posting.

Good luck.

milo