05-28-2013, 03:25 AM
Auditory hallucinations:
Garbled words.
static sounds.
shadows
the sibilance of waves
clapping and hissing
scars
bleed
Tinkered with a poem I posted earlier. I considered the comments made earlier. I don't know if I accomplished anything here so I would like some feedback. Thank you for anyone who takes the time to read.
Garbled words.
static sounds.
shadows
the sibilance of waves
clapping and hissing
scars
bleed
Tinkered with a poem I posted earlier. I considered the comments made earlier. I don't know if I accomplished anything here so I would like some feedback. Thank you for anyone who takes the time to read.

