Edited poem
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Auditory hallucinations:

Garbled words.
static sounds.
shadows

the sibilance of waves
clapping and hissing

scars
bleed


Tinkered with a poem I posted earlier. I considered the comments made earlier. I don't know if I accomplished anything here so I would like some feedback. Thank you for anyone who takes the time to read.
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Edited poem - by Brownlie - 05-28-2013, 03:25 AM
RE: Edited poem - by milo - 05-28-2013, 06:05 AM
RE: Edited poem - by Brownlie - 05-28-2013, 06:15 AM
RE: Edited poem - by milo - 05-28-2013, 06:45 AM
RE: Edited poem - by tectak - 05-28-2013, 07:52 AM
RE: Edited poem - by billy - 05-28-2013, 11:09 AM



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