05-27-2013, 04:55 PM
Alright, so this is the first forum I have ever joined. I would not consider myself a serious poet, but I do enjoy writing poems and reading other work. I am mostly just doing this for fun and to get my work out there for some feedback. I'll start with this.
Trust is something fragile, handle it with care.
Finding someone trustworthy is simply rare.
For me, I trust no one, its my very own curse.
When I think its getting better, it seems to be getting worse.
Trust has taken it's tole on me already.
I can't seem to have a relationship that remains steady.
My life will consist of finding a cure.
I cannot move on, when I'm so insecure.
Please help me, Lord, I can't do this on my own.
My biggest fear of all is dying alone.
The poem is short, and not very experienced so tell me what you think.
Trust is something fragile, handle it with care.
Finding someone trustworthy is simply rare.
For me, I trust no one, its my very own curse.
When I think its getting better, it seems to be getting worse.
Trust has taken it's tole on me already.
I can't seem to have a relationship that remains steady.
My life will consist of finding a cure.
I cannot move on, when I'm so insecure.
Please help me, Lord, I can't do this on my own.
My biggest fear of all is dying alone.
The poem is short, and not very experienced so tell me what you think.