The metronome (second edit)

The metronome (second edit)

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05-27-2013, 06:42 AM

Hi Ryan, quite an atmospheric piece you have crafted, for ME though the poem ends at "no my child, I've different plans for you". everything else comes across as rather verbose, let your readers imagination run riot, they'll enjoy it Wink

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The metronome (second edit) - by Ryan_w_r - 05-26-2013, 04:47 AM

RE: The metronome - by Brownlie - 05-26-2013, 07:13 AM

RE: The metronome - by Ryan_w_r - 05-26-2013, 07:35 AM

RE: The metronome (first edit) - by Ryan_w_r - 05-27-2013, 02:25 AM

RE: The metronome (first edit) - by saeity - 05-27-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: The metronome (first edit) - by Ryan_w_r - 05-27-2013, 06:46 AM

RE: The metronome (second edit) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-27-2013, 08:44 PM

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