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Thanks

Appreciate your feedback.

I find it interesting that the last lines of each stanza were more sensible to you. The last lines are idioms used to reference societal norms. I interpret your preference for a title and the last lines as a reflection of an individual comforted by shared values, strong societal norms and a well-defined worldview.

Of course, this is simply my interpretation of your interpretation, and nothing more than a humble opinion.