05-25-2013, 09:28 AM
(05-25-2013, 09:08 AM)billy Wrote: yes james. this is my point, you know and understand everything you wrote. we well me, struggled to, mainly because i'm not you and i never had the code to open the poem up. while explanations after the read may help. the poem still causes problems when read, for all the reasons mentioned.I understand Billy, I was actually thinking of now on making my poems, well less in need of a code to open them up. I think I may have went a bit overboard there, with making people struggle, which I'll try to now stay away from. This really opened my eyes, I guess this repays me the "Geez" thing.

P.S.- Its already on mild critique, Its still on the upper part of the middle on the first page, I believe

