no drama (edit based upon tec and billy)

no drama (edit based upon tec and billy)

billy Offline

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05-25-2013, 07:50 AM

mainly the last stanza i see, it does read better as does the removal of the vid Wink

still not sure the last stanza is at it's best but it is a lot better

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RE: no drama - by Bunx - 05-24-2013, 01:11 AM

RE: no drama - by serge gurkski - 05-24-2013, 01:21 AM

RE: no drama - by tectak - 05-24-2013, 01:49 AM

RE: no drama - by serge gurkski - 05-24-2013, 02:24 AM

RE: no drama - by tectak - 05-24-2013, 05:01 AM

RE: no drama - by serge gurkski - 05-24-2013, 08:22 AM

RE: no drama - by tectak - 05-24-2013, 04:28 PM

RE: no drama - by billy - 05-24-2013, 04:59 PM

RE: no drama - by serge gurkski - 05-25-2013, 03:30 AM

RE: no drama (edit based upon tec and billy) - by billy - 05-25-2013, 07:50 AM

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