Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013

[UnicornRainbowCake]

I think the first three stanzas stand on their own, as the last one comes off as arrogant.

Otherwise this is one damn good poem in my opinion, as I can relate. I would call your poem complete as is and move on to your next one. Its perfect.

Thankyou, I was worried that it did come across as arrogant rather than funnily arrogant, if you get me.

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And thankyou very much milo - I really struggle with meter, oh the woes :-(