Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013

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Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013

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05-24-2013, 03:21 PM

Just a few suggestions that would make it read a bit better, not necessarily perfect meter but close to it :-)

- Amy

(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)

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Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-24-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by James - 05-24-2013, 07:18 AM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by milo - 05-24-2013, 07:51 AM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-24-2013, 03:21 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by milo - 05-24-2013, 04:46 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by billy - 05-24-2013, 05:22 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by YaMarVa - 05-24-2013, 09:25 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-24-2013, 11:49 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by Bunx - 05-24-2013, 10:19 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by Ryan_w_r - 05-25-2013, 12:29 AM

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