05-24-2013, 07:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this Rowens, I actually prefer longer works like these. I can only dream of going to the south like your in here, it sounds pretty interesting, much better than the north, or really anything is better than Paterson, New Jersey (Anything :/). This kept me entertained throughout the entire poem, it was a pretty strange way to go about things, but its most likely how I would do it. But great poem man, and definitely, she definitely looks like a completely different person outside.

