no drama (edit based upon tec and billy)

[serge gurkski]

The French was lovely.
Coming up next
in the theatre of lusting hearts,
and now You rock,
show no inhibitions
and no underwear, No follow though, serge. " and now you rock (...........) and no underwear" Oiu?

My Lady Applebright: you are
right for my heart probably full stop here. You are trying too hard to "write" inflexion. The words are enough. So no drama, please, as we approach perfection. Irony in this!
so: no drama please
as we approach perfection.

I feel so sublime
now in my prime
fading away
into other nothingnesses. A sergism but not one of your bestnesses
Please chase my uneasy
right out through the door. Word missing. Ass? Help. Sentence has no senseness

Can you do that,
can you love me
while I am dead?
Born under a bad sig, Not a good sign
under a cheesecake moon LOVE THIS

When I was born
heaven made a mistake,
and it is hard times
to remedy that not Apart from the yoda, this is a funny line. It reminds me of something God said, and I think he may be right.....

Let me repeat for you just this:

the French was not bad.

Hi serge,
As always, you are the thinking man's crumpet. I read stuff on all sites which is undeniably rubbish masquerading as deep thought. You are the opposite! Take what you want from this.
I liked it but feel ashamed to admit it as I understood so little of it....if anything.
I sometimes feel the need to scream "make it poetry!" at your efforts but frankly, it just would lose too much in the translation.
Best,
tectak

Thanks for pointiing out the typo.(sig > sign)
And for explaining poetry to me. ;-)
A much as it will unease you, uneasy above is a noun. No arses needed.

into other nothingnesses. A sergism but not one of your bestnesses

= good enough for me.

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"and no underwear, No follow though, serge. " and now you rock (...........) and no underwear" Oiu?"

Be nude!
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"senseness" is cute. You learn. ;.)

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The French was lovely.
Coming up next
in the theatre of lusting hearts,
and now You rock,
show no inhibitions
and no underwear, No follow though, serge. " and now you rock (...........) and no underwear" Oiu?

My Lady Applebright: you are
right for my heart probably full stop here. You are trying too hard to "write" inflexion. The words are enough. So no drama, please, as we approach perfection. Irony in this!
so: no drama please
as we approach perfection.

I feel so sublime
now in my prime
fading away
into other nothingnesses. A sergism but not one of your bestnesses
Please chase my uneasy
right out through the door. Word missing. Ass? Help. Sentence has no senseness

Can you do that,
can you love me
while I am dead?
Born under a bad sig, Not a good sign
under a cheesecake moon LOVE THIS

When I was born
heaven made a mistake,
and it is hard times sometimes
to remedy that not Apart from the yoda, this is a funny line. It reminds me of something God said, and I think he may be right.....

Let me repeat for you just this:

the French was not bad.

Hi serge,
As always, you are the thinking man's crumpet. I read stuff on all sites which is undeniably rubbish masquerading as deep thought. You are the opposite! Take what you want from this.
I liked it but feel ashamed to admit it as I understood so little of it....if anything.
I sometimes feel the need to scream "make it poetry!" at your efforts but frankly, it just would lose too much in the translation.
Best,
tectak