The play (dark subject matter) first edit

The play (dark subject matter) first edit

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05-23-2013, 07:15 PM

I think this would be a fantastic prose piece, minus the rhyme ( I do feel your rhyme is done well here, no force) other than internal rhyming. I found it entertaining, disturbing ,and rather amusing as well.
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The play (dark subject matter) first edit - by Ryan_w_r - 05-21-2013, 11:09 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 06:29 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by Ryan_w_r - 05-22-2013, 06:34 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 06:37 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by Ryan_w_r - 05-22-2013, 06:44 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-22-2013, 06:46 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 06:51 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by Ryan_w_r - 05-22-2013, 06:57 AM

RE: New to poetry.. title. The play - by billy - 05-22-2013, 05:25 PM

RE: The play (dark subject matter) - by billy - 05-23-2013, 01:27 PM

RE: The play (dark subject matter) - by Ryan_w_r - 05-23-2013, 01:32 PM

RE: The play (dark subject matter) - by Heartafire - 05-23-2013, 07:15 PM

RE: The play (dark subject matter) - by Todd - 05-24-2013, 04:30 AM

The play (dark subject matter) - by Ryan_w_r - 05-22-2013, 04:59 AM

RE: The play - by serge gurkski - 05-22-2013, 06:39 AM

RE: The play - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 07:34 AM

RE: The play - by Ryan_w_r - 05-22-2013, 07:42 AM

RE: The play - by billy - 05-22-2013, 10:49 AM

RE: The play - by Ryan_w_r - 05-22-2013, 11:14 AM

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