05-23-2013, 05:15 AM
Hi itsnotterrysitsmine,
Welcome to the site, and I'm liking the look of this poem.
At first when I read the title and then the first couple of lines I thought it was going to be a "getting high" kind of poem that was saying I'm better than the rest of you. But then all of a sudden you switch it round.
It's simplicity in appearance is very deceiving, and I like it's ambiguity, it could be about a number of things, but it doesn't leave me feeling guilty that I didn't perhaps get the one true meaning.
I also like the way it starts with the alliteration on the first line.
Good stuff, I look forward to reading some more, and I'll definitely read this a few more times also.
Cheers
AR
Welcome to the site, and I'm liking the look of this poem.
At first when I read the title and then the first couple of lines I thought it was going to be a "getting high" kind of poem that was saying I'm better than the rest of you. But then all of a sudden you switch it round.
It's simplicity in appearance is very deceiving, and I like it's ambiguity, it could be about a number of things, but it doesn't leave me feeling guilty that I didn't perhaps get the one true meaning.
I also like the way it starts with the alliteration on the first line.
Good stuff, I look forward to reading some more, and I'll definitely read this a few more times also.
Cheers
AR
wae aye man ye radgie