05-22-2013, 10:21 PM
To do honors
No, death does not make poets posthumously
the essence of a poem is in this.
I now recall I did not consider you a poet yet.
I can be wrong. I stand by what i thought this January
and still deplore your loss.
to honor a man, to pay respect means to me: to say the truth.
(03-08-2013, 12:49 AM)escorial Wrote: read whats beneathsummin it up.
nature for company
people come and go
beneath nature. Ok with me.
More important; nature for company: Yes.
earth to ashes
ashes to dust
dust to earth <<< I like this and you've done much worse bc I reread you. Still. Commas wouldn#t have hurt.
all burials
put us in a place
to let others know <<< sounds nice but am I impressed? As in: really? ;-)
atheist to muslim
muslim to christian
christian to atheist <<< I like this. But i#m kinky anyway. Ha! No, it is good.
death will unite
our diffrences <<< yep, beside the typo.
will be quiet <<< our differences will be quiet? Badly phrased. Sorry, dead or not.
No, death does not make poets posthumously
the essence of a poem is in this.
I now recall I did not consider you a poet yet.
I can be wrong. I stand by what i thought this January
and still deplore your loss.
to honor a man, to pay respect means to me: to say the truth.