Peripheral but Plainly in View

[tectak]

Peipheral, but Plainly in View

Imagine being the flower
That only receives water
That ricochets from the petals of another.
To be incidental.
Peripheral, yet plainly in view.
Vestigial.
How it must long for the embrace of the rain.

Hi fer,
To save time I am entirely with serge on this one. To supplement my own crit I would suggest that you take the concept that you have barely outlined...and write a poem around it.
Check for basic errors before posting. See forum rules. You give a lot away if you fail to spot glaring typos. You don't care?...nor will the crits.
Best,
tectak