Retro-Futuristic

[rowens]

Dear Seth
What exactly happened to you?
You were young. You were good.
Life was made for you.
And you probably should
have let your thoughts out long ago
But you thought it would hurt.

What you have isn't bad. It sounds all right. But when you think about what it's saying, there still feels like some excess.
This is just another idea you might can go on:


Dear Seth,

What happened to you?
What happened to your life?
You should have had these thoughts long ago;
but you thought they would hurt.
And they do...