The play (dark subject matter) first edit

[Ryan_w_r]

The most simple thing to do is post a poem in one section: Serious, Mild, whatever. And if you revise it, post the new version above the original version.

Or if you already have two versions of the first post, put them both in the first post.

So nothing gets moved or removed. And so the comments are all in one place.

Yeah I really screwed up... I appreciate you helping me out. Won't happen again. Now I have multiple versions scattered all over and it's frustrating.

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Thanks so much for taking a the time to read.. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!! I did start to ramble a bit but if you read the original version it kinda makes sense because the guy is clearly crazy and in my mind rambling kinda shows that. I really am flattered that you would even take the time to restructure my poem an I must say... I do love your version. thanks again and if you want to read the original (which is pretty dark) it's on this thread in a reply to someone.

Thanks again!
Ryan