05-20-2013, 07:46 AM
(05-20-2013, 01:47 AM)cidermaid Wrote: Made me smile but I thought the end line was too obvious.Hi AJ,
perhaps something to link the process or phisical aspects of cheese.
Maybe a play on words : cased in bacteria
(Casein being a milk protein)
i love cheese...might need to go eat some now.
AJ.
This was more of humorous reactionary thread, to another thread at the time, although when I first posted it in my efforts to not want to spoil the marvellously wonderful witty punchline I foolishly called it "I am an Addict" and it remained like that on the main page for about an hour before it dawned on me that it looked more like a confession in a self help group.
But now that you've mentioned it there are possibilities, I did think that the word emmental is a gift with a few possibilities.
But it's back to nature Haiku for me, I strayed from the righteous path but now I must return.
wae aye man ye radgie
