05-20-2013, 06:46 AM
Just wanted to say well done on this . (I read two layers or pictures in here).
On my first pass through I struggled a bit in the second stanza with the continuation of the descriptive lists, but then a dawning of meaning and progression took hold and I got increasing pleasure from each line.
Will be back to read a few more reads before the week is out, will offer any observations as I might see them ...but for now just enjoying the read
Cheers AJ
On my first pass through I struggled a bit in the second stanza with the continuation of the descriptive lists, but then a dawning of meaning and progression took hold and I got increasing pleasure from each line.
Will be back to read a few more reads before the week is out, will offer any observations as I might see them ...but for now just enjoying the read
Cheers AJ