05-19-2013, 08:33 AM
This seems fine enough as it is. What else you got?
I find all secular angst strangely soppy. But that's partly because Christmas always leaves me with extreme feelings of suicidal despair.
This poem just came out fine for what it is.
I find all secular angst strangely soppy. But that's partly because Christmas always leaves me with extreme feelings of suicidal despair.
This poem just came out fine for what it is.
